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Magus I - page 1 by erdna1 Magus I - page 1 by erdna1
This is page one of a short story from a comic I created. The idea is to develop it to bigger stories where I can develop things better, but this allows me to test a lot of things visually without wasting a lot of time. I hope you like it, I'll be posting the rest of the pages soon, so stay tuned.
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dana-redde Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Gorgeous! Great perspective in that bottom panel!
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erdna1 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks! :)
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yaen Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011
Awesome pencils
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erdna1 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks
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mayshing Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011  Professional Filmographer
nice. the drawing is quite solid on this one. Panel 1 crop doesn't quite work because the crop is too close, if we see more of one of the human face would work better. But the bottom panel makes up for everything.
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erdna1 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks for the input. The first row of panels are just details, they are not meant to show much. The first it's just to see some people eating and drinking. Now the bottom panel was a lot of fun to do. Thnks a lot.
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mayshing Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011  Professional Filmographer
i know what you are trying to achieve in the top roll, but i had to look twice to understand what you drew, you did very well in the bottom panel.
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erdna1 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
I get what you're saying. The work is supposed to be colored too, I believe that'd help, but it should stand on its own anyway. My bad.
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mayshing Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011  Professional Filmographer
its ok, just let colors save them. lol
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erdna1 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
:)
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