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Magus I - page 1 by erdna1 Magus I - page 1 by erdna1
This is page one of a short story from a comic I created. The idea is to develop it to bigger stories where I can develop things better, but this allows me to test a lot of things visually without wasting a lot of time. I hope you like it, I'll be posting the rest of the pages soon, so stay tuned.
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dana-redde Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Gorgeous! Great perspective in that bottom panel!
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erdna1 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks! :)
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yaen Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011
Awesome pencils
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erdna1 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks
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mayshing Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011  Professional Filmographer
nice. the drawing is quite solid on this one. Panel 1 crop doesn't quite work because the crop is too close, if we see more of one of the human face would work better. But the bottom panel makes up for everything.
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erdna1 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks for the input. The first row of panels are just details, they are not meant to show much. The first it's just to see some people eating and drinking. Now the bottom panel was a lot of fun to do. Thnks a lot.
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mayshing Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011  Professional Filmographer
i know what you are trying to achieve in the top roll, but i had to look twice to understand what you drew, you did very well in the bottom panel.
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erdna1 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
I get what you're saying. The work is supposed to be colored too, I believe that'd help, but it should stand on its own anyway. My bad.
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mayshing Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011  Professional Filmographer
its ok, just let colors save them. lol
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erdna1 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
:)
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Featherbeard Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Is that a slug-mount? That's GREAT! :) Really a stunning piece, can't wait to see it colored! (I know it's a very silly, small thing, but the crispness/deep black color of the text bubbles compared to the sketch's lighter lines is distracting me. X) )
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erdna1 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks! I didn't knew what a slug mount was before you mentioned it, but I guess it is :) About the text, it's not minor, I don't like it very much either, but I also wanted to put the words on it. My schedule is tight, but I'd love to color it.
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rcrex Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Really cool.
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erdna1 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks man!
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prodigal-son Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2011
excelente :) mesmo k tenhas desenhado com o propósito d ser uma boa pagina só a lápis, s quiseres ver arte finalizado diz, adorava "inkar" esta historia :)
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erdna1 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Obrigado. A verdade é que este estilo usa várias tonalidades de lápis e não era com a intenção de ser arte-finalizada, mas, se quiseres tentar, posso-te mandar uma versão de alta resolução, sem problema. Envia-me o teu endereço de e-mail.
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prodigal-son Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2011
envie-t agora um mail ;)
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erdna1 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Resposta enviada.
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jackolta Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2011
excelente página!
entrei de imediato no ambiente
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erdna1 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Munto obrigado. Era esse o propósito.
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Jovan-Ukropina Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2011  Professional Artisan Crafter
great page 1
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erdna1 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks Jovan
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Jovan-Ukropina Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2011  Professional Artisan Crafter
You are welcome Andre!
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erdna1 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
:)
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PeterPalmiotti Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Very well done!
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erdna1 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks Peter.
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PeterPalmiotti Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Your very welcome.
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Kekutius Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2011
The last panel is just incredible. The perspective and everything.

And hell yeah I'll stay tuned. :D
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erdna1 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks. It was really fun to do that one. Cool, more soon.
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turdo Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Interesting. I want moar!
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erdna1 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks. I'll post another one today.
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Ross-A-Campbell Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
very nice man. Crazy details.
I think you could do a whole book in pencile like this without inks or colors. Your art is just so easy to read :D!
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erdna1 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks! My idea was to do pencils that could stand on its own, so that's nice to hear.
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Ross-A-Campbell Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
well you've succeeded!
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erdna1 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
:)
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Locke-Lyesmith Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011
Great pencils!
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erdna1 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks man!
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